Teacher feedback for 31189a-01

Assessment Feedback / Assessment #31189/01

• Student Name: Colleen Sedgwick
• Trainer Name: Wendy Campbell
• Student Number: E0498332
• Date: 17.02.17
• Unit/s of Competency: CUFDIG502A Design web environments
• Submission Check List: C 

Research, Compile and Report Assessment

The assessment is comprised of 4 parts as stated on the assessment brief:

• Part A - Bag lady requirements
• Part B - Web Environments
• Part C - Design
• Part D - Review and confirm

Grade: Credit

Overall Assessment: Competent

Overall Feedback:

PART A

1. You have done a good job outlining the clients requirements - aims, exclusions and constraints. 
2. You have successfully identified competitors and their strengths and weaknesses - good to see some visuals.
3. Your mind map is very detailed and you have included relevant points relating to the client. The mind map needed to relate to the target audience for the site. As well as elderly women, I think the bag lady would attract a wide range of women from varying backgrounds - elderly women may not have as many tech skills as younger / middle aged women who would certainly love a bag. :-) 
4. Well done on good research here. You have identified appropriate questions to ask the client.

PART B

Well done Colleen you have identified very appropriate Web environments and have highlighted good reasons for including them and why they suit the target audience.

PART C

1. Your site map and wire-frames are very clear, easy to understand and well laid out. Easy to follow, distinction of text, images etc is clear.
2. Good research into information architecture and navigation design.
3. It would have been good to see your final design of one page feature on it's own page so as the navigation and content was more readable. 
4. Your colour scheme worked well - the furry purse perhaps needed to be cut out a little cleaner and perhaps an image that has wider appeal would have been more appropriate. 
5. Your bag lady logo is a very nice concept - clean and simple - elegant. It needed to be designed in Illustrator and would have suited being a vector graphic as it is a little pixelated.
6. Include a footer - this can include the copyright info, social media icons etc.

PART D

1. The questions you've identified in your questionnaire are good ones to ask a client when designing a site. 
2. You have also done some interesting research here although the idea of this section was to design a short questionnaire in order to gain feedback on your final design from five people. See below...
1. Design a short questionnaire of 10 questions to gather feedback about your designs. 
2. Contact at least 5 people willing to assist with this. 
3. Ask them to respond and provide meaningful feedback about the work you have completed in Part C, in particular the static screen design.
3. It would be better if you didn't include all of the text from the assignment. Just the section or questions numbers and headings is fine. 
1. This will make the document more concise and the content will stand out better. 
2. Your first page or two can then comprise a title and table of contents.
3. Refer back to the original questions to ensure you stay on track. Your research skills are very good. :-)
4. Although not assessable here your overall assignment presentation has improved, well done. 
1. Give yourself a little more space in the centre margins between the columns and ensure the graphics are good quality - no pixelation or artefacts (from over compressed jpg's). 
2. Use strong hero images as they will sell the overall design.

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