Teacher feedback for Checkpoint C (Progress Challenges 1-4)

Submission feedback

• Wendy Campbell
• Wednesday, 25 January 2017, 10:15 PM
• Grade: PA

Well done Colleen. Some very thorough research here!

Your exclusions and constraints list has been thoroughly explored and you have presented very relevant questions. Good investigations into competitors.

Your target market mind map is extremely comprehensive! Well done! Only problem is I couldn't read the text as it was too small and it pixelated when I zoomed in. You may need to divide this up over a few pages so that you can enlarge those parts or alternatively simplify the diagram and also list items to save space.

Your research into the i Smell was interesting although it was a fail! - possibly could develop into something we use in the future though.

The poster design needs a good simple hero image. I suggest using the i Smell prototype (or create your own vector version of this). A nice clean clear image along with a strong headline. The 3D text at the top looks a little dated as does the TV screen. The overlay marble effect doesn't really work.

Keep the text simple, use a good hero image and a striking heading to create a good visual hierarchy.

You've conducted some thorough research here. Well done.

Regarding presentation, although not always assess able for assignment purposes it's a good opportunity to practice your design and layout skills - it also makes your work easier to read. 

I'll attach some useful files to give you some layout pointers.

Have a nice Australia Day!

cheers

Wendy :)

• AdobeUserManuals.pdf AdobeUserManuals.pdf
• CreativeSuite.pdf CreativeSuite.pdf
• Example-layout.pdf Example-layout.pdf
• PagelayoutSeries.pdf PagelayoutSeries.pdf
• PagelayoutWritten.pdf PagelayoutWritten.pdf
• TypeLevels.pdf TypeLevels.pdf

Submission

Sedgwick-E0498332-D0105-31189a-Checkpoint C.pdf

Notes

Dear Wendy,

Please find enclosed Checkpoint C for Module 2.

sincerely,

Colleen Sedgwick

(E0498336)