30534a - Progress
challenge 2
By Colleen
Sedgwick
Feedback and
collaboration
This progress challenge requires you to collaborate and get feedback from
other professionals, facilities, peers, and design communities that would allow
you to address the technical and creative specifications of your 2-D and 3-D
based designs. You need to complete the following:
2.1. A list of companies, professionals,
printing and fabrication companies and peers that you need to collaborate with
for your project. Explain why you would need their help and collaboration in
order for your project to be fully realized.
2.2. Two clear screenshots of at least two
separate posts in an online design community you signed up with to get feedback
on your 2-D and 3-D designs.
TIP: Navigate to the student forum to engage in the discussion with your peers
Answer
These would include the
following companies (that manufacture 2D and 3D designs):
For 3D:
Skope Group[1]: this company is a
building company using pylon, monolith and acrylic signage – most of which is
for outdoor installations, though they state on their website they can also do
indoor, as well as outdoor, cladding[2].
City Wide Signs and Neon[5]: this company appears to
specialise in corporate signage, and is probably more suitable for office and
commercial installations[6]. What Sedgie Art would need includes: digital
printing[7] and reception signage[8].
Rotoflex Coatings[11]: specialises in
laminating.
Design communities – these include:
Australian Graphic Design Association[12];
International Council of Design[13];
As well, there is Open Colleges[15], where I can communicate
with my classmates; Facebook[16] (which also has a
discussion group for the same class) and Behance[17].
Pictured on the next three pages
are images for 3D (outdoor and indoor) installations and 2D outputs.
3D outdoor signs
3D indoor signs
2D - Stationery
Feedback from others
Open Colleges forum
Re: ACTIVITY
progress challenge 2
by Lakeia Mundine
- Thursday, 14 April 2016, 11:38 AM
Hi Colleen,
Thanks for the feedback.
Your design looks good, using the tube of paint is a good idea as it reflects the name of the business and what’s it’s about. I love the three indoor and the bottom outdoor logo designs.
However, I would change the top outdoor oval shaped sign design and replace it with the indoor logo design, because the signage is ‘roundish’ and having everything going across in a straight line makes the logo design and the words look smaller and hard to notice. If you use the indoor logo layout in the oval sign, it will not only fill up the white space in the sign but also make the business name bigger, and customers would be able to see the sign better.
Overall I think that the design is fantastic!
- Lakeia
Thanks for the feedback.
Your design looks good, using the tube of paint is a good idea as it reflects the name of the business and what’s it’s about. I love the three indoor and the bottom outdoor logo designs.
However, I would change the top outdoor oval shaped sign design and replace it with the indoor logo design, because the signage is ‘roundish’ and having everything going across in a straight line makes the logo design and the words look smaller and hard to notice. If you use the indoor logo layout in the oval sign, it will not only fill up the white space in the sign but also make the business name bigger, and customers would be able to see the sign better.
Overall I think that the design is fantastic!
- Lakeia
Re: ACTIVITY
progress challenge 2
By COLLEEN SEDGWICK
- Thursday, 14 April 2016, 11:42 PM
Thanks Lakeia,
I thought
maybe the oval outdoor sign would be suitable for an old building with 'classic'
architecture like you find in inner-city Sydney (or Melbourne) for instance,
either the CBD or Inner West. But I can see how the text can look a bit
too small.
Cheers,
Colleen
Improvements
Another 2D mockup
Re: ACTIVITY
progress challenge 2
By Lakeia Mundine
- Saturday, 16 April 2016, 10:05 AM
Hi Colleen,
Wow! Your signage and bag mock-up really looks professional and amazing. Well done!
Wow! Your signage and bag mock-up really looks professional and amazing. Well done!
Lakeia
Re: ACTIVITY
progress challenge 2
By COLLEEN SEDGWICK
- Tuesday, 19 April 2016, 03:05 AM
Thank you
Lakeia, I'm slowly getting the hang of this Photoshop thing
If I do open
up a studio/office, I intend to open up a gift shop alongside it, hence, the
paper shopping bag
Cheers,
Colleen
[1] Skope Group (2015): Our Work, http://www.skopegroup.com.au/our-work/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:09:35 PM
[2] Skope Group (2015): Retail
Fit out (http://www.skopegroup.com.au/what-do-you-need/retail-fitout/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:12:13 PM
[3] Skope Group (2015):
Printing, http://www.skopegroup.com.au/what-do-you-need/printing/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016, at 6:18 PM
[4] Skope Group (2015):
Design, http://www.skopegroup.com.au/what-do-you-need/design/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:20 PM
[5] City Wide Signs (2016):
Home, http://www.citywidesigns.com.au/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:25 PM
[6] City Wide Signs (2016):
Corporate Signage Services, http://www.citywidesigns.com.au/corporate-signage-services/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:27 PM
[7] City Wide Signs (2016):
Digital Printing, http://www.citywidesigns.com.au/products/digital-printing/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:29 PM
[8] City Wide Signs (2016):
Reception Signage, (http://www.citywidesigns.com.au/products/reception-signage/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:32 PM
[9] Price Screen (2016): Home,
http://www.pricescreen.com.au/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:33 PM
[10] Price Screen (2016):
Custom Signage, http://www.pricescreen.com.au/custom_signage.html;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:34 PM
[11] Rotoflex Coatings (2016):
http://www.rotoflex.com.au/; accessed
Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:36 PM
[12] Australian Graphic Design Association (2016): Home, http://www.agda.com.au/; accessed Tuesday,
12 April 2016 at 6:39 PM
[13] International Council of
Design (2016): Home, http://www.icograda.org/; accessed Tuesday,
12 April 2016 at 6:43 PM
[14] Design Institute of Australia
(2016): Home, http://www.dia.org.au/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016 at 6:45
PM
[15] Open Colleges (2016):
Open Space Forum – D0105 Diploma of Graphic Design, Study Period 4 (Module
1), https://learning.opencolleges.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=66775;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016; accessed 6:50 PM
[16]
Facebook (2016): CUV50311 Diploma of Graphic Design; https://www.facebook.com/groups/296307140494534/;
accessed Tuesday, 12 April 2016, at 6:52 PM
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